You got some serious talent! There's a lot to process here and so much symbolism! Beautifully written. What do the dead bodies symbolize? I have some ideas, but I want the understanding to come from you. I really enjoyed reading this and I'm usually not one for poems. It's haunting and very profound. Great job!

I loved this story! Did you ever see the kid again? Do you think it was a kid messing around or something else?

I love this story! I will definitely be buying the book and looking into your story! Thanks for sharing.

Great story! And yes, according to experts the smell of sulfur indicates a demon or devil. This is a great story and it was written so well!