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" Would you accept the challenge to stay the night in the Chislehurst Caves? "



© Mack's Paranormal - 05-25-19



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This was a grand storytelling adventure in pure horror, I enjoyed the history that was bestowed, then right when the challenge began, things got creepier and creepier! The ending blew me away.
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Thank you! I truly appreciate your support and comments! I really tried to up the ante with this story. It was too good and I wanted to do it justice!
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It was good but based on the previous comment, I was expecting a better ending. A twist, maybe. I feel like I missed something.
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(05-25-19)A guest user Wrote: It was good but based on the previous comment, I was expecting a better ending. A twist, maybe. I feel like I missed something.

Sorry about that! I feel the author wanted to emphasize more on the experience of the two men and felt that giving them some kind of closure would be the best route to go as an ending. Thank you for listening and I appreciate your feedback.
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I hate caves and i've never even been in one. I would not have done this challenge lol Creepy cave? No thanks!!
Great reading!!
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